Date: April 10, 2008 @ 2:44 AM
Nice mellow start...
I love that bass!!!
Very catchy & addictive layout - nice layering of instrumentation, particularly on the build-ups (chorus) sounds amazing!
Beautiful work here buddy - I love all the expression you bring to this with the heavey instrumemtation layering where it counts.
Very exciting & very well thoughtout.
Date: April 19, 2008 @ 6:43 AM
really cool start, makes you want to listen to the rest of it i like how you build the dynamics up, very dynamic. i love the chord change throughout.
Date: May 4, 2008 @ 3:55 PM
Very clean intro and general production...
Your voice came out very well recorded here..Nice balance between all parts...I also think you performance carried true feel and a real solid energy!!!!
Date: May 5, 2008 @ 1:15 AM
How could anyone forget you Jon! .. nice mellow music.. and feel the passion in your vocals, enjoying the lyrics .. nice track!
aorpete
johnyprestige
i like how you build the dynamics up, very dynamic. i love the chord change throughout.
Electronicla...
theres a bit of everything here great lyrics a real good beat 
& lovely ambient backing music 
.. nice mellow music.. and feel the passion in your vocals, enjoying the lyrics .. nice track!